Seeing his body lying helplessly on the ground made my heart break. I was alone. No-one was there to help me… (10 months earlier)
Hayley's Multi-sensory paragraph;
Getting closer to the ear piercing sound I got a little more worried. Heart pounding my mouth wide open, eyes filling with tears, I could not believe it. Falling to the ground, this was my home being destroyed. Trees screamed for help as the beast demolished them. I did not know what to do. Trying to stand up my heart was as cold as ice. The massive claw was just about to pick another one out. This was too much for me all I had left to do was run.
Holly G's Exciting Ending;
Panicking I looked everywhere for the hunters. All sorts of thoughts were inside my head.Desperately I called out for them but there was no reply. Suddenly a menacing hiss came from behind me. Slowly turning round I saw a pair of hypnotising, black eyes, a flashing tongue and a gleam of venom around a mouth… Would my life really end like this?